Hi, I'm looking forward to your feedback to determine if this meets your expectations or if there any adjustments you want. Thank you.

Thank you for submitting a design! I love how it goes around the whole shirt so that is good but I think it needs to be simpler and less busy. Definitely keep the boarder lines but my location marker needs to have the most attention. I don't want the other many things like the castle, lighthouse, etc because it takes away attention doesn't it? I think my marker should sort of be where the hot air balloon is on the chest.

Thank you for your respond, I will do the adjustments and submit a revised version ASAP.

I have submitted three new versions and am awaiting your feedback. Thank you.