To date, many of the designs have missed out on a central concept we did not initially highlight. We anticipate our business model will be very relationship-based, much as bees are. Ideally, the logo should exhibit some interrelatedness in an accessible way - an "urban swarm." We don''t want a messy design full of bees, but we would like the complexity of bees and the complexity of living in a city communicated in a simple way.

Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
thanks,
sajithgopalan.