Hello,
I have submitted few designs. Your feedback would help me to improve them.
Thank you in advance!
-Jaroslaw

Hi there and thank you for your submissions. I prefer your designs which include the lady with some accessories. Perhaps if you swap the umbrella for a hat/beanie and introduce some colour as much of the existing packaging is on a black background.

Hello,
Could I have some feedback please?
It would be very helpful.
Regards,