Hello. Can you provide me a feedback? I want to know If I am on the right track. thank you

Would you care to give me some feedback it would allow me to make some more revisions since the deadline was extended. It would be greatly appreciated.

You did a great job, the curve is becoming very steep now; stay inline with the first top 3 designs that are rated 5 stars, especially DonJ, be straight to the point, concise, and clear. Let it sing from first look.

You did a great job, the curve is becoming very steep now; stay inline with the first top 3 designs that are rated 5 stars, especially DonJ, be straight to the point, concise, and clear. Let it sing from first look.

feedback please

Hello Project Owener,

Can you please provide feedback on my submitted designs? Thanks. So that I can tweak and fix it according to your taste :)

Thanks,
DYNAKID