Hi Sir,

Kindly check our design concepts & provide us your valuable feedback via private message in case you want to move ahead with our designs.
As you can understand no project can be successful without timely feedback & continuous interaction, thus we are requesting you to provide your comments ASAP.

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As a revision, I would prefer the logo above the SAINT FRANKLIN writing to have NO LETTERS (no SF), just a simple but upmarket design of a wreath or plant like in the example provided

And i would prefer the font to be as similar to my font provided as possible