Dear Madame/Sir,
I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.
Thank you
Best regards,
Melo

Feedback please.

we are looking for a cute version logo which might has a cartoon character( animals, plants, or anything adorable,memorable, and easy to have a story behind it, as well as better linking to our company's name. we will use the character for peripheral products later.
After we carefully thought we decided above style. Can you try that type? Sorry for any inconvenience. Tone honest, yours were really good but more like a tech company logo

we are looking for a cute version logo which might has a cartoon character( animals, plants, or anything adorable,memorable, and easy to have a story behind it, as well as better linking to our company's name. we will use the character for peripheral products later.
After we carefully thought we decided above style. Can you try that type? Sorry for any inconvenience.