Hi i'd love to work with you on this! If you could leave an email for me to contact you on that would be great, thanks.

Hi,

I have submitted a design and would be grateful of your feedback.

Kind regards,

Darren

Jesse@thelawnhelpers.com

Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
thanks.

Hello. I would be grateful for your feedback on my submissions.

could you provide feedback please, thank you