Hello, a critique of my design is needed and appreciated. Quick feedback is necessary, thank you

Hi Jsmart, Thank you for your efforts, We like the look of your design, is it possible to see with larger font?

IF you want the font to look bigger, sure I can do that for you. Thanks for your response (please not that is not the final design, the design may change)

sure, I'll get it done in a gif

But I think your going to like the smaller font best. I'll send you two versions

Looking forward to your feedback.
thanks in advance.