Thanks for the invite. Kindly review my entry and give feedback

Just submitted my design #6974327. Would be great to hear some feedback on the design. The text under the logo gets cut off when I uploaded the image and I am working on fixing it.

hello sir,
I am Design24 but I am deactivated form DesignCrowd .so I submit my design form my Brother id.Please consider my entry form my Brother this id and please elemineted my entry form Design24 id.Thanks a lot.
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Design24