Feedback please.

Hi,

Pls see task description. I wanted a ribbon design to replace the 'B' in 'boutique' as well as a heart shape to replace the dot on top of the 'i'. Colours wise, would like it to be a bit more toned down. Not so bright pink.
Regarding the design, I think it doesn't tell readers that mine is a handmade shop selling hair tie/ hair bands/ hair bows.