Hello,
I hope it's fine now :)

Hi Hello and Good Day!

I am very much interested to this project. Kindly check my initial concept and please let me know your feedback and suggestion if there something you want it to include or change into it.

Looking forward hearing from you on this project. Thanks and have a nice day!

Best regards!

Hi Hello and Good Day!

Any feedback with my latest update base on the given direction? Looking forward to work on this project and hearing your precious feedback!

Thanks and have a nice day!

Best regards!