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Hello.
Please feedback for my design. The design please let me know if you have any questions regarding.
Thank you for attention

I am sorry if I upset you by not choosing you. You asked for my feedback initially and I gave it. It was your choice to resubmit another design.

Hi. I have asked my friends and clients about the Logo choices and everyone has steered me to the more casual, playful design. You would decidedly be my second choice.

feedback please. thanks