good day project owner, could you send feedback on my proposal? thank you.

Good day to you, could i please get feedback? If i do t hear from you soon, im just gonna retract my design.. Hope to hear from you soon. Thank you..

Hello Project Owner,
Thank you so much for the rating. Is there anything that you want me to change for the improvement of the design?
I am willing to do anything that will suit your taste.
-Melo