Feedback please! =)

Dear Project,
Good day, I would like to ask if can kindly please provide feedback and suggestions on the new designs (logo with the company name included this time) that I have submitted for your project.
Thank you very much!
Hoping to hear from you soon
Regards
-Kate

Dear Project Owner,
Hello, can you please checkout the new submissions sent?
The logo design has been changed/updated.
Thank you !