please provide feedback on my design. Hope you will like.

I think I still like the first one you did, but would like the bird to look more like a plover with the mottled back!

I like the original bird better, I think. Please add a period after Co. and delete the Big Island Hawaii part. Try HI after Co. So, go back to the original design and make these changes, please. Also, regarding the bird color and feathers, please see the drawing of a plover on Canon Stock Photo. I really like how those feathers and coloring are. I would like it to look like that. Thank you!

Please go back to the original bird and design. But you can keep Acupuncuture Co. straight and right under Ackerman. Then on the very bottom, inside of the circle, add Hawaii curved in small letters. Thanks!