Hi, please give your feedback on my submissions, feel free to suggest any changes or modifications.

Thank you!

Hi Mitch, thanks for liking my concept. I have done the changes as per your suggestions and submitted some revised versions. Please have a look and give your feedback. Changes are welcomed.

Thank you, Have a nice day!

Dear Sir,
Thanks a lot for your invitation to share on this interesting job and please be advised that i submitted my design and i hope you will be satisfied with my work and waiting to your valuable feedback and rate soon.

Thanks,
Moataz Azab