Feedback please.

The design looked like it is from a generic font program.
Need more dynamic impact. Thank you for your time.

Ok my apologies. I am new to this so I was commenting on another group.
Your design has a cloud and rifle correct ?

Its ok. Yes my design has a cloud and rifle :)
Please give me feedback on it.

Hello All. Thanks for your work.
Please read the brief again and do research if you do not understand something. Ask me specific questions if you do not understand something.
Apparently many of you have been issued the same software. Please stop submitting the same design in multiple views on glass and with lighting effects as it takes too long to edit.
Also some of these views will never work in the real world of letterhead etc.
Keep your submissions to 2 views. Please do not submit the same design 20 ways. I want each of your submittals to be totally different not just a different color. I can ask for different colors. Thank you.

As well designers. There is an idea posted in the brief to inspire.

DESIGNERS: DO NOT POST THE SAME DESIGN IN MULTIPLE SCENES !!!! SOME OF YOU HAVE POSTED THE SAME DESIGN 15 TIMES. STOP DOING THIS PLEASE.
I CAN GET YOUR IDEA IN 2 MAXIMUM. I CAN ASK FOR DIFFERENT COLORS.
I run out of time to review because of all this.

Same deal as your other project...price is too low for both logo and business card design.

The 'thinker' image was up-loaded as a reference or inspiration of some sort only.
Please no designs with that image only. Thank you.

Thanks for the feedback. That makes sense to attractive the top shelf. Did not know the difference. Just signed up and paid what the site said. This whole experience with the 'DesignCrowd' website and business -NOT the designers- has been rather trying. Hard to understand and get correct as busy as I am. I will look into this matter.