Dear Sir,
I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.
Thank you

Best regards,
Coco

Hi Coco,
Thank you for your submissions. Actually, we are looking for something that is a bit more playful and appealing to parents with very young children. So maybe using colors that are child oriented, or using animal characters that are often used in products aimed at babies and toddlers.
Thank you.

Hi Coco,
Thank you for your submissions. Actually, we are looking for something that is a bit more playful and appealing to parents with very young children. So maybe using colors that are child oriented, or using animal characters that are often used in products aimed at babies and toddlers.
Thank you.

Dear Sir,
Thank you for your feedback.
I improved my design and I resubmitted.

Best regards,
Coco