Any feedback on my design?? Thanks.

Hi I like this design, it's just not quite right yet. I'm not sure exactly what to change. I think I might like other colours better. Could you try some different combinations of colours?

Green (Forrest green or a green that resembles nature), darker blue, red.

Could we try the word "systems" in black too?

I saw a twig with leaves coming out of the spinal column on another design and I liked it. Is there any way to artistically add in a twig out of the bottom of the brain to represent the concept of "new growth."

Thanks for the revision. Could we try the brain in three different shades of blue, with darker on outside, lighter in the middle, and lightest on bottom?

Also I don't like the leaves for hands so let's change that back to the way the hands were originally.

Thanks!

Hi I think this is getting closer to what we want. I realized that it would be nice if the three different shades of blue could be the same as those in our current logo. Could you google "triunesystems.ca" to see the three colours in our current logo and see if you could match them to the brain colours?

Also I am still wondering if we can somehow make the brain connect to the Triune systems somehow or for there to be a representation of new growth coming out of the brain like tree leaves or a tree and that somehow connecting to the words Triune Systems.

I also like the shading you did in your first design around the runner. Could you put that in the new one as well

Any update on my design????