HI! Please provide feedback on my design so I could improve it. Thanks!

I love to participate with this project if payment guaranteed.
Best regards,
Coco

Dear Madame/Sir,
I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me any feedback?
And please tell me if I am on the right track.
Thank you
Best regards,
Coco

greetings! I saw that the project deadline was extended. What are you seeing that you like and do not like so I can improve my designs to your specifications. Thanks!

Dear Sir..,

Plese send me feedback for my design,thanks.. : )

Regards..