...feedback would be nice...

HI, one feedback would be nice :)

Feedback on my design please.

I think the design is boring that has one and you see this stuff all the time what about being different they said they put this designer on this job especially to shove it in my face ok because I saved the project and as soon as I saved the project so obvious you had 100 designs submitted and this project had been sitting round for a long time with no submissions kellogs is boring prefer Weetabix their adverts are loads better I'm a vegetarian and don't like chickens on anything because people are cruel to them and I think the design is boring and non descript with no atmosphere. I'm glad I didn't win.