sir, please feedback

I would like to see if someone could do some designs with the second "i" in Indigo being a lipstick tube. Thank you! Please remember to submit all logo designs on a building.

sir.please look at this revised and give your valuable feed back
Thanks & Regards,

Feedack please so I can do any changes you want .

but mine wasn't a feminine enough logo? pretty bold/masculine looking, but whatever.