Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design ? If you have something else in mind help me and write me that so I can come up with complete new versions . Please check my portfolio and profile and see what I can do for you .

With regards
Kim.

Revised design submitted

Hi Project Owner,
Will you accept .psd(photoshop files) as final deliverable? what's your email address?

Thanks & Regards
Cindy

No sorry- we need a variety of common formats.