Thank you all for your time and effort on this project. I've had this idea for a few years and now I'm finally getting started! I apologize for any vagueness I left in my brief as it's my first time working with a designer. I'm providing this message as a way to help narrow down what I'm looking for.

Here's the bulk of issues I'm seeing: not using an ancient design, too much color, very busy, rigid/block lettering.