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Raymond

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Hi,

Could you please review my submissions and leave your feedback.

Thank you,

Raymond

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Hello. Sorry for my delay. Here is my feedback. The design numbers refer to the layouts on the separate website you sent to me.

1) replace the header image with something more like an image of one person helping another. If you can provide me with an email address [or write to me at rwk (at) poundwise (dot) co ] I can send you two images that i like.
2) change the "poundwise" font in the header to the font in our logo. you used it in other layouts.
3) put a link for "are you a financial advisor? click here" or similar near the top. This link should direct to a page with the content from
poundwise.co/for-advisors/
4) remove the "why" half owl. and put "why" in the text above
5) make the 4 biases clickable to expand and reveal a short-description of each (i can provide descriptions via direct email)
6) change short-term thinking to the brain with the clock icon in design 4, change heard mentality to a graphic of a sheep, change gamblers fallacy to the dice in design 4, change illusion of control to video game controller.
7) Remove the Buffet quote. It seems not to fit.
8) Change "gain better insight" sub text to "receive valuable coaching to learn how your personality affects your financial decision making)
9) change icon of "connect your accounts" to something like a chain link or a plug and socket.
10) change the order and make it clear that these things move in steps from profile to connect accounts to gain insight to check progress
11) change "our team" to the design 8 and add a third cofounder. Bullets for him are: Clinton Brownley, PhD; Chief Data Scientist; Decision Analysis Expert; Statistical Modeling Solution Architect; American University; Carnegie Mellon University
11a) remove "head of 'fin" and "head of tech" from other bios
12) remove the "call us"
13) Change the footer to design 8

Oh, and add a link to a Blog. I can send you the URL via email.