please check my entry and provided feedback

There's not many who have really followed the brief or been very creative. We have a few virtual reality goggles in there. A few nice typefaces. Nothing really different. Most of the designs are very similar.

Dear Sir,
Please looking feedback for my submission. Please check my design #14339623 & #14339624. Please sir let me know if needed any changes or modification.

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hello Sir,
Feedback please for my new submission design #14352856.

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Everyone PLEASE stop sending me multiple pictures of the same design on different textures.

Usted me dijo que no quería enfatizar o separar la VR , que falta de seriedad!