Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions . Please help me

to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply.

PLEASE NOTE
WE WILL CHOOSE THE WINNING DESIGN THIS SUNDAY AT 8.00 PM UK TIME

Please give me your outmost feedback for my design that would be great

PLEASE CHECK my new design """ #15139022 ""

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SJ

PLEASE check my design and give some feedback if i'm going in the right direction.

thank you
SJ

please check my new design

thank you