Dear Employer,
Feel free to give your valuable feedback

Dear Employer,
I have submitted a revised design..
Feedback Please...

Plz don't copy.
https://previews.123rf.com/images/glopphy/glopphy1509/glopphy150900054/45337162-Gold-lotus-logo-vector-Stock-Vector-flower.jpg

and:
https://cdn.dribbble.com/users/44323/screenshots/2517192/lotus.png