feedback please

Please check our design and reply some feedback for improve the design.

revised design submitted

revised design submitted

Thanks to all for such wonderful submissions, and a special thanks to all of you who made revisions based on feedback I provided. It was harder than I expected to choose from such great options, but I have selected a final design and am just working to get the color schemes right before awarding the logo. I have eliminated all but the design I intend to select.