Feedback please.

Hello there, thanks for considering and I'm sure you will be doing great here.

Submitted a carefully worked, original industry-related concept, and would love to hear on it.

Note the change in the yellow nuances. I would strongly suggest with a stronger tone, as it doesn't stand on white, and is far less intensive comparing to the violet.

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american football or soccer?

Hi, I have submitted a logo, can you please check and please provide me your feedback.
Thank you.

Hi, I have submitted a logo, looking forward to your feedback for my submission.
Thanks.

Hi, Feedback please.