Hi! Please provide feedback on my design so I could improve it. Thanks!

Hi. Thanks for the invite, but however, the payment has not been guaranteed. Before embarking on hours of designing and back and forth changes, eliminations and so on, a guaranteed payment for this project would help us as designers believe our efforts could actually be rewarded with a payment instead of false hope. Please don't take this the wrong way, but that's to ensure designers aren't wasting their time and you're committed to the project payment through DesignCrowd.com.

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