Can i have feedback on my logo proposition?

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sir, can i get some feedback...

Hello there, hope you are doing great.

Worked on a concept described briefly inside the examples. Would love to know what do You think.

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Dear Concern Your Final Designs Been submitted i have submitted the two design for you hope you love this time, Love to have feedback on designs.

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Could You provide feedback?

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Could you give us a feedback please?
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Any update?
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