feedback please , design #19139063 ,regards

Hello! Please take a look at my designs (19151890 and 19151891) and let me know what you think at your earliest convenience. Thank you! Amy

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what exactly you have in mind ? can You please explain so we can re think ?
I weould like to request you to explain me your thoughts so i can again try
i want to learn from my mistakes .. give me one more chance and explain what exactly you want ?