feedback please , design #19137611 ,regards

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Regards.

Hi Would you consider a logo in a emblem?

what exactly you have in mind ? can You please explain so we can re think ?
I weould like to request you to explain me your thoughts so i can again try
i want to learn from my mistakes .. give me one more chance and explain what exactly you want ?