what exactly you have in mind ? can You please explain so we can re think ?
I weould like to request you to explain me your thoughts so i can again try
i want to learn from my mistakes .. give me one more chance and explain what exactly you want ?I am wanting something that appears to be more hand-drawn and not just text.

Can You please help and explain us wwhat exactly you want so we can again try couple best for you to take a Look ?