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Client has added more details to the brief, along with a rough sketch which I have added to the original brief

ADDITION TO BRIEF

The River is an addiction recovery facility with a program called 'creative recovery'. The program is about getting to the source of human nature, and through the discovery of one's nature, to develop the life skills necessary to creating a new kind of life. When addicts refer to sobriety, they speak of 'being in recovery', this way of being and living is less of a cure and more a result of having discovered and practiced a new way to live.

- A river is the current of life. A river is also the source of life and sustenance, and a timeless symbol of mother earth's giving and sustaining of life.
- A river forges its way through the landscape and evolves its form; it is symbolic of man forging his life through will, evolving through experience, and growing through transformation.
- A river changes shape and character as it travels through the landscape, man does the same
-The sun is the ever present source of inspiration, a symbol of the source of 'creative recovery'
- The sun is not a destination on the horizon, it is near, it is magnanimous, radiant, reassuring
- The sun is real or an abstraction of its reality; it is not religions, heathen, oriental or playful. It is non-denominational and it must be real and powerful, it is a star that lives for billions of years

The ideal logo for The River is a masterful confluence of these desired attributes. It should feel effortless, and it should not seek to 'strive' artistically, instead, it should project a relaxed sense of confidence and provide a feeling of reassurance, even to the extent of being soothing and welcoming.

Attached new sketched interpretation of the brief, as an example.

Please be so kind as to comment on designs, otherwise we can not figure if we're on the right path or not. Awaiting you request for any modifications. Kind regards,