feedback please ,design #19335901 and #19335902 ,regards

feedback please #19335899 and #19335900, regards

feedback appreciated.

feedback please

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?