feedback please #20189364 and #20189365, regards

Good day. You can give feedback about the logo ? 20244412 . Thank you. Have a good day

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

If you want completely new one and if you have a sketch or thought ..please explain ?

Give me another chance .

Feedback please
Design #20246645
Thank You