Your feedback on my design is greatly appreciated. Thank you.

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Hi, Kindly provide your feedback on my entry work

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please check my design. #20284739
if you need any changes please fell free to tell me. thanks

Hello owner of the contest, low ratings - one and two stars only demotivate designers to participate with new projects. Because low ratings lead the designer's rating to a crash. If you do not like a design, you better eliminate it without putting one or two stars. Thank you for your understanding

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