please provide feedback on my submission (#20359288), thankyou

Hello there, thanks for considering and I'm sure you will be doing great here.

Submitted a carefully worked, sophisticated concept and would love to hear on it.

King Regards,

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20372203 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.