Feedback please for my design (#20368129) and (#20368128) that's important for my quality design in the future, thanks

Hi,

Thanks for the invitation, please check #20374418 and #20374977

Regards

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20365125 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.