feedback please #20362392 and #20362393, regards

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20363095 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.

Hi.please feedback #20362707
I want to improve my designing.so please help me with your feedback.
Thank you