feedback please. design #20526517 , #20526518 and #20526519 , regards

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20519757 and #20519756 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.

Feedback Please...

Dear sir
please see my updated design ..
Thank you.