Hi, Feedback Design(#20559831), please. :)

Hello contest holder,

My design is # 20578850

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Kesign.

Revision sent kindly check thanks!