feedback please.. design #20728266 , #20728267 and #20728268 , regards

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #20746016...

thanks..

Hello, please check the design of my logo and give good feedback. if you want a change I'm ready to help.

This isn’t exactly what I was going for. I posted an idea to the brief page. Can you consider that and submit again?

This isn’t what I was going for. Can you look at the picture I put on the brief and consider resubmitting?