feedback please ...

please check my design #20767908 , regards

I would be much appreciated for feedback for the designs. Thank you.

Hi! Not sure if you saw my feedback attached to the logos you sent? I love what you've done but could we try and shorten the lines going to the left from the first "O" and the line going to the left from the last letter "n"? Maybe make them half as long? Thanks

Sorry, the line going to the RIGHT from the last letter "n"

Hello, yes I have seen your feedback. Ok i will short the lines and send the back to you.

If you can send me your feedback
Thanks for your time

Designs #20784933 - #20784935