hi sir please check my design

Dear sir ! check please #20827500

Regards,

Feedback please

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.


Low ratings - one and two stars only demotivate designers to participate with new projects.
Because low ratings lead the designer's rating to a crash.
If you do not like a design, you better ELIMINATE it without putting one or two stars.

Thank you for your understanding.


Thank you!

Best regards,
Coco

And how is that similar to the logo provided?

woooow ... another generic logo