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Please check my design #21550204,

sir please check design #21554746 and #21554747

I found that you really like my design #21557507. Can you please suggest some changes so that my logo becomes you top choice and I get an opportunity to work with you ?

I have uploaded my design #21568880 and #21568879 as per your given brief.I found that you like my design. Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

Any feedback please.