please check my new design

Hi there! I just submitted my entry today and carefully crafted my submission, Kindly check design (#21589301) and (#21589300). I look forward to see your feedback. Thanks!

Hi there! Done with the changes, please check design (#21603764) and let me know if you still need changes. Thanks!

Sir! Kindly have a look on my design #21607006.
Please give some good feedback to help us to grow.
Thanks.