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Your feedback #21705159, request further changes.

Hello Project Owner,
Thank you for inviting me with your project.
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes. If you don't like the design simply eliminate it, but don't rate it with 1, 2, 3 star.
Possible comment on my design would be much appreciated.
Thanks & regards,
Slant Line Media

I have attached modern logo style. Please give your feedback for the logo design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

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